INDIVIDUAL ORAL COMMENTARY: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B5BAIwN0tHcOR0UtNVVzeWc4NDdIUHN6V09LUHJVcDY4V2g0 Grading: Criterion A: Knowledge and understanding of the text or extract - 7 At the beginning, I was able to identify the the context (text and author). I think I identified the themes and connected them to the rest of the story, although not in depth. However, I am not sure how effective I was at using well-chosen evidence to make connections. Criterion B: Understanding of the use and effects of literary features - 7 I used a pretty good amount of literary devices in my opinion, although I did not have a broad variety in what type of devices I looked at (repetition seems to be my favorite). Although I usually forget to do this, I actually did connect these devices to the effect they had on the reader. I need to make sure I do this for all examples, and broaden the types of examples chosen. Criterion C: Organizati...
Step One Walt Whitman's notebook is small, compact, and very worn. Despite its ragged appearances, the notebook seems to be a prized item. The book is black leather and is bound with a simple, yet elegant design. The outside of this book is just as meaningful as the inside of the book. Whitman kept his thoughts in secrecy, or perhaps safety, by closing the pages within the cover. The worn appearance shows that despite the books once pleasant appearance, Whitman used it fairly often to record his thoughts. Each page within the notebook is a page number, ranging in number from 503 to 944. That is a lot of pages. There is a wide range of content shown on each page, showing the unique and varied origins of his poetry and works. Whitman has recorded names, dates, addresses, thoughts, events, questions, and drawings. Many of these pages also have a red stamp that says "The Library of Congress". This stamp d...
ANALYSIS #1 "Gregory Samsa woke from uneasy dreams one morning to find himself changed into a giant bug." 1. First word is the name of the character "Gregory Samsa" - character immediately introduced 2. "woke" - occurs in the present 3. "giant bug" - imagery is very vague, basic word choice, unsure of species or specific appearance 4. "uneasy dreams" - uncomfortable, anxiety inducing dreams 5. active voice, third person → missing "bed", uses "changed", "Gregory" #2 "When Gregor Samsa awoke from troubled dreams one morning he found he had been transformed in his bed into an enormous bug." 1. First word is "When" - reflecting upon an event (narrative to analysis) 2. "awoke" "found" - occurs in the past 3. "enormous bug" - adjective is strong/exaggerated, emphasizes the absurdity 4. "troubled dreams" - anxious, caused ...
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